Tuesday, January 9, 2018

The Drying Dresses, She And He Comments

Rating: 5.0

There, dresses were drying in the opposite terrace
Some shook their hands, some their legs, small frocks "twist twist"
The genuine hero breeze's spirited friendliness that was
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Indira Renganathan
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Akhtar Jawad 11 January 2018

Sometimes we misunderstand others but when we realize the fact, we regret. A thoughtful poem.

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Seema 09 January 2018

Very expressive and a bold write, thanks for sharing

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 January 2018

Yes Ma'am, you always pick it very nice theme to work on. Thanks for the sharing of the lovely poem crafted so beautifully. Your sense of contrasting between the obese nightie and the little frock is so amazing. 10 for it. Regards. Happy new year. Subhas

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Bharati Nayak 09 January 2018

Angrily she hastened to go rolling down the stairs But then he saw the little frock too flown off far Yelling he ran down fast and saved that little frock And ofcourse the obese nightie too Villain turned hero in her eyes now - - - - - - A lovely poem with its humor and irony.

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Sada Bihari Sahu 09 January 2018

Very nice poem. Angrily she hastened to go rolling down the stairs But then he saw the little frock too flown off far Yelling he ran down fast and saved that little frock thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2018

....Villain turned hero in her eyes now...'The Drying Dresses, She And He' is indeed an amusing poem! Thanks dear madam for sharing! Go on singing this way and lead a flowery life! Pray god bless you. I am sorry due to pressure on time I have not read many of your flower poems. i will find time to read them all.

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