The Duck Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

The Duck

Rating: 4.5


How cute the duck walks,
Beautiful when they flocks.
Walking along the raft,
Looks like going for a feast,
The mouth with a long and lightly curved,
Shooking the head while they walk.
But no shooking while they swim,
Eating plants, roots or seeds in the water,
But on land, eating the grains wasted by farmers,
Oh, the baby ducks
eats invertibrates for a first one week,
It is fantastic to watch they sleep
By covering their head and beaks
Under their wings,
Hidden from their predators,
But most of them sleep in the water at night,
Where their predators can't reach them.
Migrating towards other place during winter,
Where there is a mild cold,
Since they swim in winter.
The god created the ducks,
Although their life is very short,
But they take care their life.
When a ducks can leave in the world,
Why can't a human leave?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 12 November 2015

A very realistic poem on the life and habits of ducks! Except for a few spelling mistakes, the poem is a great piece of writing! Keep writing Vaidyanathan!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 November 2015

A poem on duck! That is really cute. It is so important to watch the birds and animals. We learn a lot from them. An interesting observation.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 10 November 2015

Verily, a good observation on ducks and an informative piece of work Loved reading it

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 November 2015

Your observation is very nice and the write about ducks is very informative and interesting. The question raised in the end, when ducks can live in the world, then why can't human is thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.9 points.

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