VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

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The Duck - Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

How cute the duck walks,
Beautiful when they flocks.
Walking along the raft,
Looks like going for a feast,
The mouth with a long and lightly curved,
Shooking the head while they walk.
But no shooking while they swim,
Eating plants, roots or seeds in the water,
But on land, eating the grains wasted by farmers,
Oh, the baby ducks
eats invertibrates for a first one week,
It is fantastic to watch they sleep
By covering their head and beaks
Under their wings,
Hidden from their predators,
But most of them sleep in the water at night,
Where their predators can't reach them.
Migrating towards other place during winter,
Where there is a mild cold,
Since they swim in winter.
The god created the ducks,
Although their life is very short,
But they take care their life.
When a ducks can leave in the world,
Why can't a human leave?

Topic(s) of this poem: dude


Comments about The Duck by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

  • Valsa George (11/12/2015 9:19:00 PM)


    A very realistic poem on the life and habits of ducks! Except for a few spelling mistakes, the poem is a great piece of writing! Keep writing Vaidyanathan! (Report) Reply

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (11/12/2015 11:39:00 AM)


    A poem on duck! That is really cute. It is so important to watch the birds and animals.
    We learn a lot from them. An interesting observation.
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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (11/10/2015 7:33:00 PM)


    Verily, a good observation on ducks and an informative
    piece of work
    Loved reading it
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  • (11/9/2015 10:23:00 AM)


    Your observation is very nice and the write about ducks is very informative and interesting. The question raised in the end, when ducks can live in the world, then why can't human is thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.9 points. (Report) Reply

  • (11/9/2015 7:05:00 AM)


    While a Walk. I think you meant to write while he walks. and then this: teach him. I think this meant to say where they can`t reach him

    When you write anything, go through it a second time to check the spelling and the grammar. On a second reading you will able to see those things much better. Never write and leave it as it is; always check it a second time and a third time, too, if you are not sure. I too do this each time I finish a poem.

    The poem is not bad written but it is a bit like so much prose in some places, but you make some good details about the duck.

    The best to you!

    Luis Estable
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 9, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, November 9, 2015


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