The Faces Of You Poem by Nosheen Irfan

The Faces Of You

Rating: 4.8


It's too long
The distance between
What you say
And what you mean
Words you say
Seldom meet
The words in your heart
I'm lost
In the crowd of your faces
No way out.

Wednesday, January 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lies,deceit
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 08 January 2016

Distant love; but with hope. Nice work.

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Manonton Dalan 08 January 2016

lying heart hehehhehe

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2016

Distance between faces is measured to make meet in hope of expression. Very wonderful poem shared.10

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Rajnish Manga 06 January 2016

You have put across very succinctly the whole gamut of a flimsy relationship witnessing an erosion of mutual faith. Very impressive portrayal with brevity. Thanks.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 January 2016

Thank you so much Rajnish for your thoughtful analysis.

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Lahore, Pakistan
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