The Fading Love Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

The Fading Love



Three uttered words
From destiny's place
Our eternity
Forever and always

Realization came
For you and I together
It's short, How could it be
The length of our forever

The words We've spoken
Is it not enough
For us to be potent?
How could things be so rough?

Does it really contain destiny
This thing we said we have
Or is this just the one
Called the fading love?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Pascual 28 August 2009

woah.. where'd you get your inspiration? ? LOL

0 0 Reply
Nashy Lamen 27 August 2009

Love slowly fading... Sad really... temporary love... slowly vanishing... sad poem.. but it's a nice write... continue writing..

0 0 Reply
Ted M 27 August 2009

Sometimes the important factors in Love just fade away, or maybe it's not love in the first place. Love is what remains when you take away the beauty, the pasion and the fun. Nice write emotions flowing well till the end.............

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success