The First Cucumber Poem by Lily YANG

The First Cucumber

Rating: 4.5


Sow the cucumber seeds in the garden,
The growing vines quick climb up then,
Twine the poles and straw ropes to show.

In general we curiously watch first flower,
If you donot pick up the first cucumber,
The fresh cucumber in green turns yellow.

Wednesday, December 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,life,memory
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
childhood poetry
love poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 23 December 2015

Beautiful nature lesson for kids. A needy stuff. Thanks for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 01 January 2016

Cucumber flower and cucumber- here we use it as symbol of love and good health. I like it, thanks. go on..

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 January 2016

Nice work with the inspiration from your garden of love.

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Manonton Dalan 31 December 2015

I used to pick them when they're so young, it's very good for pickle so is your poem...xiexie

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Mj Lemon 28 December 2015

A wonderful metaphor. Great poem, Lily.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 December 2015

Different steps of sowing cucumber seed and it's growth in a creeper with blooming flower and growing cucumber nicely narrated. Thanks for sharing.

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Lily Yang 23 December 2015

Thanks

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