Wednesday, December 9, 2009

The Game Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her Mother had told her that
Love was a game of give and take
With sometimes a bit of heartache
But her Mother did not mention that
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Sandra Martyres
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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 December 2009

Love could be really very illusive too Like chasing a moving shadow....................wonderful imagery of love, . interestingly heartfelt by its unique genre of ingenuity,10+++, thanks for sharing

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James S Newcomb Lang 19 December 2009

True love is ilusive, worth finding, never worth loosing.

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Indira Babbellapati 17 December 2009

intriguing game, isn't it? a lottery...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 16 December 2009

sad story sandra...well written

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 16 December 2009

sad story sandra...well written

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Raj Nandy 13 December 2009

A NICE WRITE SANDRA! IT BROUGHT BACK MEMORIES OF MY SCHOOL DAYS IN ROYD STREET, CALCUTTA, WHEN THE JUKE BOX IS TO PLY, - 'ONE AND TWO AND I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU, I HOPE AND I HOPE THAT YOU LOVE ME TOO! LET'S PLAY THE GAME OF LOVE '! 10! -Raj

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Carol Gall 10 December 2009

you have voiced what happens to a lot of ppl in love it is such a hurt to the heart well written 10

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Fay Slimm 10 December 2009

Love is truly a game to some - and that means they have not found the meaning of true love, - - - a good presenation of the pitfalls of the 'game' Sandra - - hugs from me and 10 + + + Fay

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Meggie Gultiano 10 December 2009

A mother's advice should be listened.As the saying goes, 'mother is always right' she should not give it all, all the love for that man, she must retain a portion of herself. A good write, Sandra. a good job.. Hugs, Meggie

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Sadiqullah Khan 10 December 2009

Expressive. Many women end up in a worse situition by such deceptions. There has to be mass awareness in young women about this. Nice expression of a social issue.10

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Rakesh Bedi 09 December 2009

very touching poem, sandra.......

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sadly such things happen.. a fine poem on a topic that needs to be discussed.

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Romeo Della Valle 09 December 2009

Sandra, sometimes, love becomes a game for some people, well penned poem, if you have a chance, read my poems titled: 'WHEN LOVE BECOMES A GAME' and 'A LOVE'S GAME' you got my vote 10+++Love and Peace

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