The"Gilgamesh" Poems(1) Poem by Daniel Brick

The"Gilgamesh" Poems(1)

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It was simple to defeat Gilgamesh.
But firstI had to build a figure of
Gilgamesh in my mind, a near-sentient
figure, that could change things and
be changed. Then the First Law arose
in my mind, like a column of destiny.
It said: Impose Your Will. Again and
Again. That is what the goddesses and
gods do, never reflecting on what they do,
until damage is done, people are suffering,
and the Great Wheel of Fate rolls over
and on. Awake, Gilgamesh, awake, stir
your mind-stuff into acts, which once
completed within become your worldly glory.


The "Gilgamesh" Poems (2)

It's really simple in its essence.
But we are so divided from each other
that some hear nothing stirring, deep
or shallow. We do not recognize each other's
motives, deeds, because others hear howlings,
screams that crescendo into choked silence,
crazed pleas for HELP. Then sheer Silence.
Then the howlings return... This must be
a test for breathing, because when I tried
"circular breathing" I stopped the noise,
that causeless sadness in my mind was stilled.
And even our dreams keep us apart, dreams
rise and set, they are prodigal, display
themselves like Rodan's statue of Honore de Balzac.

Thursday, October 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,myth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 01 November 2019

Hey, Daniel! Glad to see these new postings—sonnets no less. Since I anticipate more, please tell me how you see Gilgamesh. It’s been a while since I’ve had anything to do with his epic tale. What lingers (accurate?) is the human G laboring heroically against forces more powerful and capricious—not, of course, stuff to inspire a positive or optimistic view of our existential plight. -Glen

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Bharati Nayak 24 October 2019

I know very little about the character GILGAMESH.But I find it many of your poems.I think in this poem Gilgamesh stands for power of positive thinking that we should repeat in ourselves to fight against any negative force and become victorious.

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