The Given Heart Comments

Lovers mean to give heart and this gives us wonderful feelings. Twill tear and blow up all within! Love shall keep the ashes. A brilliant poem is excellently penned.

Nicely written. For of her heart he from the flames will find But little left behind: Mine only will remain entire; No dross was there, to perish in the fire.

I can understand its fact.... Well penned poetry... So deep in soul...... Naila 💖💖

well penned- -well penned- -but what do comments like that add to our knowledge? Sigh. For such a painful topic I found this poem to be strangely beautiful- -is that what the words well-penned mean?

Mine only! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Oh what peril a man`s heart suffers for love

For of her heart he from the flames will find But little left behind: Mine only will remain entire; .... well penned

i can relate to this. Very beautifully penned down.