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The Gods Were Illuminated

Rating: 4.6
I walk into my room,
the door shuts behind me.
I am in my own world

I kick off my shoes,
-they lie in a geometric pattern
on the floor

I am 16 years old.
It is snowing,
it is dark,
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There is an ocean in the sky, and it is as though the gods are illuminated in heaven ... ya that always reminds us of divine power and it s, existence, , , , ,10 lovely poem dear
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dramatic. marks 10 shan
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Joebert Penalba 19 April 2010
nice work samuel.. i could say that you are born to be a poet..continue to inspire people
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Sipokoyto Lim 08 April 2009
I love this poem, somehow it brought back some of my melted memories. I give it a 10.
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Jose Elias 29 January 2009
Nice, i really liked it
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Morgan Bodden 24 January 2009
I like this, very nice finish
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Louis Rams 23 January 2009
this is quite good, just as it should
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MuRdA RhEE 16 January 2009
Yeah Mann... Dis Poem Is Da Sh** lol Bringz Me Back To Thosez Dayz lolz Comment Minez! ! !
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the cemetery man 16 January 2009
beautiful! and masterfully written I can see it all in my mind's eye, It takes me back to when I was so much younger, a similar time, a scene, thoughts just like yours. I read this poem over and over This is one of the best! 10+
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<font color =fusha>Amy 16 January 2009
i loved this poem it really made me hold on to each and every word. nice write: D
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