Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,692 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

The Golden Verse - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

your voices of golden verse
wakes me up from deep slumber
as coursed from the dream heartful
rousing the warmth of love endeared

when surfing the beach in a morning early
awaiting the golden sun to rise yet
to delve the dew from the depth of night
dazzling across swaying of the grass as
revered by the mist of the night past.

as you make your day promising bright
and muse over morning to rave up the day
suave and serene yet blazing the love
by wishes to the sky for the blue moon.

let all your prayer be blossomed
and be sparkling with the fragrance
yet scattering like a rain in summer
quenching thirst for smile to the green

when each speckle of desire being blazed
like flairs of a night in blue moon
with the light of success in ascension
being sheltered and safe yet unreasoned.


Comments about The Golden Verse by Dr subhendu kar

  • (10/13/2007 9:53:00 PM)

    I too have surfed that beach and had prayers blossoms, thanks for such a pictorial reminder... One peace at a time... Deana (Report)Reply

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  • (10/1/2007 11:08:00 AM)

    . A loving heart is the truest wisdom. In every rill a sweet instruction flows.as coursed from the dream heartful place immeasurable value on the goodness in your heart. what can i say more about Doc, you always find a good verse for your poems.
    thanks for sharing,
    Mary
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  • (10/1/2007 9:55:00 AM)

    1....let all your prayer be blossomed
    and be sparkling with the fragrance
    yet scattering like a rain in summer
    quenching thirst for smile to the green.
    (...a prayer blossoms, sparkles, scatters like summer rain..................wht more cn b said for a prayer.............prayer itself is so beautiful, and ur wrds have adorned thm with timeles beauty of wrdz)
    2...with the light of success in ascension
    being sheltered and safe yet unreasoned............
    (...success with light, yet moving ahead, sheltered nd safe.....to achieve succes and sustain it so........lovely)
    the whole of it is so beautiful..........lovely poem indeed...
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 1, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011


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