The Goodness Of The Ocean Poem by Richard Lackman

The Goodness Of The Ocean

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What is it about a pond or lake or ocean
That attracts us so and sets in motion
Feelings of serenity and peace
So that common worries seem to cease

The attraction must be more than just the beauty of a shore
As that's a scene that we've all seen a thousand times before
There must be deeper meaning that inspires us to go
And walk along a sandy beach or watch a river flow

Perhaps the water acts as a connection
To our deeper thoughts seeking direction
And though the water may be calm or rough
We perceive in it a truth and that's enough

To re-invigorate our spirit and to help us see
The beauty which surrounds us and which helps to set us free
From stress and strife as there can be no worries or commotion
While lying peacefully beside the goodness of the ocean.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 16 September 2012

how brilliant just splendid poem sir....i have to confess that i am not fortunate enough that i haven't seen Ocean even once and i let be that way but after reading your poem i really wish to see it and one day i will and until then to satisfy myself i will come here and your poem so thank you for this wonderful piece love, payal

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Mandi June 05 July 2012

A delightful read, Mr. Lackman! You and I write very similarly in style, and I can really connect with your work. Thank you so much for this relaxing poem.

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Simon Collins 25 June 2012

Like a meditation, really enjoyable words, thanks

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Heather Wilson 04 June 2012

A beautiful poem, So calming just to walk along a quiet beach and just listen to the wash of the waves.

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Valerie Dohren 03 June 2012

Lovely poem Dick, water is so often very inspiring, maybe it is an unconscious reminder of our origins.

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