The Harvesting Machine Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

The Harvesting Machine

Rating: 5.0


The Harvesting Machine


It was a little late
In the evening,
The harvesting machine
Has just started its work
In our paddy field.
It was working
All through the day
And our part of the field's
The last one for the season.
Moon had already risen,
A full moon.
My brother's grandson
A big boy of three
Was there to supervise
Harvesting ‘his' field.

As the work was going on
Suddenly he felt hungry
And wanted to go home,
But, his duty ….

He fell silent
For a few moments.
Suddenly his face lit up
In the moonlight;
He looked up and said,
"Oh Moon,
From up there, clearly
You can see the field,
Continue supervision
I have to go home"
And climbed on to
My shoulders.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2022

Oh, Wow! .. Such a beautiful, precious story/poem! .. However sweet and innocent of him to ask the moon to supervise! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Susan Williams 24 January 2022

so very touching--- and so like a young child to see in nature what we no longer see because our souls have grown tough---beautiful moment recorded for all time here, my friend---5 stars and wish I could sprinkle it with a thousand more because that poem put me in that field under that moon

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2022

Thank you, Susie. Childhood is is bundle of innocence.

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Nabakishore Dash 16 January 2022

How innocent the little boy was! Intelligent crafting.

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 January 2022

Very true. Thank you, Nabkishore.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 January 2022

A captivating poem.............10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 January 2022

I loved the little boy who climbed on to your shoulders to see the moon!

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 January 2022

Thank you Geeta. He is such a lovely boy, so very intelligent for his age. And so fond of me, as I am of him.

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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2022

So beautifully written! .. I can visualize these precious moments shares! .. A poem to cherish! .. Again just Wow! .. So awesome and sweet! ..+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 January 2022

Thank you for reading this message

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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