Thursday, May 23, 2013

The Hunters And The Hunted (Revised) Comments

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Every time you start screaming, I'm just thinking is he even listening?
Because I can't even think. someone pass me a drink.
So much repetition in my head.
Another massive headache.
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Brian Jani 06 June 2014

Well written i like this poem

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Shahzia Batool 24 May 2013

it is essentially about life's problems and how we go about tryintg to sort them out, problems come and wash over us, whether we want them or not.we cannot avoid them, we must need deal with them.the poem is structured on some inner debate, some chaos and anarchy...the tables get turned and the hunters become hunted and vice versa...all are paying fine for the crime of existence, it looks! ! !

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David Wood 23 May 2013

Can everybody live the American dream or are some dreams shattered fragments of circumstances out of control. A lovely write.

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