The Invisible Life Poem by Varsha M

The Invisible Life

Rating: 4.8


Well defined boundary
Circumference our existence
Yet we never feel bound.

Over the facets of life
One thing never change
The breeze that envelope us.

Quietly it keeps moving
Filling us with breath we need
Never exhausting even we breath more.

Truth is that we believe, what we see
But I never saw how air looks
Which I enhale every time.

Sometimes magnificent builds
Even though I fails to see
And brain gives up to imagine.

Silent life is its existence
How much ever we give up
It never leaves us ever.

Thank-you my dear breeze
Never have I met you ever
But still you fill me, with your essence.


A hand on walk with thee
Upturned pages like gist
Which I failed, all these year.


Sometimes purposeless companionship
Walking along the ocean sweep
Steals the pain hidden deep.

Breeze is often the best peer
Be it, times good or weird
Healing is for sure.

Written on 08.04.2020

The Invisible Life
Friday, August 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: air,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written for ALSPOETRYSNDPROSE #DAY 4 for #25DAYSCHALLENGE on prompt #BREEZE
The essence of breeze is great. Feel the pleasure and freedom as you climb down the stanzas.
Last two stanzas added today.

Photo by Pablo Orcaray on unsplash.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2020

We breath more! ! ! ! Living; Enjoying the fruits of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 14 August 2020

Breeze is often the best peer........wonderful write.....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Sharad Bhatia 14 August 2020

This is a wonderful poem about the " invisible air" . Really appreciable. Many - many thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. Rated 10000++. Regards..! ! ! सुना तू हवा हैं, साथ - साथ चलती हैं, मेरे।। तेरे इस एहसास को स्पर्श करना चाहता हूँ, तुझे एक बार गले लगाना चाहता हूँ ।। जानता हूँ, तू दिखती नहीं, फिर भी तेरे आगोश मे सिमटना चाहता हूँ ऐ हवा, तुझसे मोहब्बत करना चाहता हूँ।।

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