The Tiny Moments Poem by Varsha M

The Tiny Moments

Rating: 4.8


What makes love great?
The tiny moments we dwelt.
The lingering drive we felt
And the longing we swelt.

Yes the love we cloth in
Pains a lot as it deepen
But still we long to don
Love that counts as fun.

Serious look of life
Would have no life
Had this nagging dive
Love always bribe.

As we walk along the path
Togetherness of the one dwelleth
For it's difficult to uncouth
The love that is worth.

How much ever war raged
In the battlefield of mind
Love alone can calm sound
For it always sees far beyond.

Even though love hurts
It rules over all with guts
'Cause of the human essence bursts
Until bond finally wert.

Love is life
Only if you dive
Not just for a jiff
But to live like a chief.

Mark my words, o listener
Love becomes ev'n more easier
As we entwine and merge there
Before eloping as united wire.

The Tiny Moments
Monday, January 11, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love,love and life,love and friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I have tried to bring out the goods one admire in love which makes them to overcome all challenges. Photo courtesy pinterest.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 12 January 2021

Beautifully crafted

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Varsha M 13 January 2021

Thank-you so much sir. It's really encouraging.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 January 2021

A beautiful poem that brings out the wonderful attributes of love. Beautifully crafted and mellifluous when read. Insightful write. Congratulations for a well deserved accolade.

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Varsha M 13 January 2021

Thank-you Rose for your kind words. Thank-you for for encouraging.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 11 January 2021

Your imagery is so unique, powerful and beautiful! I just loved this, and the picture, too.

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

I love the way u write_ Please read a few of my poems as well like 'Consolation' and 'Brother in Arms' _I'm sure you will like it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 August 2021

Lingering drive is elastic of the tiny moment... profound poetic depth!

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honesty and belonging makes it great.. good piece

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Chinedu Dike 20 March 2021

A beautiful creation, well articuated and nicely brought forth with conviction.

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Indira Renganathan 02 March 2021

A lovely poem on love...deeply thought out....5*****

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