The Irony Of A Perfect Life! Poem by Manisha Malani

The Irony Of A Perfect Life!

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A sense of completeness in a lonely soul
A guilt and a pride, on a high together,
Aspiring and perspiring both in vain
Being one for someone and nobody for the other!

Understood and clearly misunderstood
Satisfied and yet hungry for a lot more,
Left out and crowded, fully-emptied
Nothing to do yet occupied to the core!

A failed achiever, a lost winner
colorless oceans, so blue, so green,
laughed till it hurt, cried to comfort
deaf and blind to whats heard, whats seen! !

Loved and hated, a like and a disgust
Life of a king and feeling of a pauper,
Remorse of past and fear of tomorrow
Smiling with an eye with tear in another! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 04 May 2017

A good start of a lovely journey. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 04 May 2017

The poem, now a favourite of mine, is a perfect image of a person's life which has to go through a variety of experiences which could, sometimes be, diametrically opposed to each other. Loved reading it.

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Qiniso Mogale 02 May 2017

A failed achiever, a lost winner. A good poem. keep writing

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