The Journey Poem by Anita Atina

The Journey

Rating: 5.0


The journey will soon begin
For now a whirl wind of activity,
To be well prepared,
For this almost feels like a pilgrimage into my past,
To bring elusive closure,
As well as, new beginnings.
Mysterious discoveries waiting
For my curiosity to find them

I feel new stirrings
Of hope, or relief from dulled monotony,
And the hushed whisperings of words,
That used to run in poetic harmony!
My stream had run dry,
But now, there is just a hint of moist earth
A slight trickle flows,
In my river of joy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 11 June 2009

This is wonderful, sensual and full of hope, I think you will find the place you want to be 10+++

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Brishti Mazumdar 08 June 2009

I feel new stirrings Of hope, or relief from dulled monotony, And the hushed whisperings of words, That used to run in poetic harmony! ...so good to go thru.....I loved your thought....your way of expession...10++...Brishti Mazumdar

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Alison Cassidy 07 June 2009

This is an exceptional poem, Anita. You have taken the blank page of your creative block and sprinkled it with the seeds of renewed creativity. '...the hushed whisperings of words, ' is particularly evocative. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sue Sie 07 June 2009

What a journey...a great write Anita....very well written 10 Sue

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Ian Bowen 07 June 2009

Anita, this one read so very well. First class piece of writing.10/10 Ian

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