Mark Normand

The Last Goodbye - Poem by Mark Normand

Look at me, please don't cry my darling;
it's nothing I will be just fine.
Smile, show me your beauty, let me
look at my love one last time
Stay, don't leave me in darkness;
I'm so afraid of being alone.
Talk to me, I need to hear voices; the
sweet sound reminds me of home.
Touch me, once more will you hold me; I
am starting to feel so cold..
Pray for me, I am feeling so guilty, for
damage I've done to my soul.
Love me, I hope that you love me, I
love you more than I can say.
Leave me, my spirit has gone now, and I'm
sorry babe that I couldn't stay.

Comments about The Last Goodbye by Mark Normand

  • Chris Zachariou (8/17/2014 7:22:00 AM)

    Great work, the loss come through. So very sad. (Report) Reply

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  • Hebert Logerie Sr. (8/9/2014 2:40:00 PM)

    The title speaks for itself. Adios! Adieu! (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (8/17/2012 1:18:00 PM)

    This is very good but, Why the run-on: let me, the, I, for, I, and I'm? It mars an otherwise very good sensitive poem.
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  • (8/12/2012 1:48:00 PM)

    This poem ripped my heart out.This is so deep.Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Adam Mckim (8/12/2012 2:27:00 AM)

    Wow, I seriously started to tear up to this. Very emotional and sad. Great work on this. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (8/10/2012 5:12:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, very emotive and heartfelt. (Report) Reply

  • Shanice Rodriguez (8/6/2012 10:38:00 PM)

    Wow, I love it, even though it almost put me in tears because I felt the emotion in it and it was strong. Very Nice Sayings (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 6, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 17, 2012

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