The Last Wish (Haiku) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Last Wish (Haiku)

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A little water in pond

Thousand fishes wait for the black cloud

But everyone'sdream is precious.

The Last Wish (Haiku)
Monday, November 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,fish,lifespan,longing,rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Sahoo 27 November 2017

A little water in pond Thousand fishes wait for the black cloud Beautiful sharing. 10++++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 27 November 2017

Thousand fishes wait for the black cloud But everyone's dream is precious. 10++++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 27 November 2017

Everyones dream is precious .yours is no exception sir.More precious

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Kshirod Kumar Dehury 30 November 2017

A little water in pond Thousand fishes wait for the black cloud Beautiful sharing. 10++++

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Lopamudra Kajolika 01 December 2017

A little water in pond Thousand fishes wait for the black cloud Beautiful sharing. 10+++ Lopa

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Lopamudra Kajolika 01 December 2017

A little water in pond Thousand fishes wait for the black cloud Beautiful sharing. 10+++

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Kshirod Kumar Dehury 30 November 2017

Thousand fishes wait for the black cloud But everyone's dream is precious. 10+++ Kshirod

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Kshirod Kumar Dehury 30 November 2017

Thousand fishes wait for the black cloud But everyone's dream is precious. 10+++

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Kshirod Kumar Dehury 30 November 2017

A little water in pond Thousand fishes wait for the black cloud Beautiful sharing. 10++++ Kshirod

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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