The Last Love Letter Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Last Love Letter

Rating: 4.9


In you,
My dear,

I have lost
My shapes,
My horizons,
My outlines,
Edges that define
Whole of me.

In slow momentum
You grip me,
My uneasy being,
My uncertain edges,
My hesitating curves,
The whole of my womanliness
So uncertain,
Within your defining hugs
And those narrow braces
I am falling into
The vast well of warmth
Within you.


Little by little
I feel you brace,
Your ever tightening
Embraces uneven
Over my skin deep essence,
My uncertain edges
Your warm shadows render
Salvation to my urges,
Your dense sweetness
Forms a scintillating touch,
And calms my "me"
Calm my shudders
And help me find
My goal, my destiny.

Saturday, April 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,love and dreams,love and friendship,letter,love,love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 22 April 2018

The poem is written from a woman's perspective, although the author I guess, is a male poet. However, the poem is nice and well articulated.

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Bharati Nayak 16 April 2018

Very artistic presentation of love in its wholeness, - - -from tender feelings to passionate love.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 April 2018

I fully agree with you, Bharati Nayak, and appreciate your nice comment and correct observation.

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Thank you dear Apa for the great remarks in these nice words. Regards Subhas

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Suratha Kumar Rout 14 April 2018

The Last love story is very nice. Thanks for sharing. 10++++

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Thanks dear Suratha for such a beautiful remark.

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Rini Shibu 07 April 2018

Wonderful love letter, very romantic

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Rajendra Rout 03 May 2018

Yes madam it is a wonderful and romantic poem I agree with you

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Thanks dear Rini for so pleasant remarks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2018

Last love letter was wonderfully presented as love was only the destiny. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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