Erasmo Rayon

Rookie (June 27th,1990 / Mexico City)

The Legendary Beast - Poem by Erasmo Rayon

Warnings began at the dawn of the rotten land
The ground shakes probably to elude more threats
Evil perpetrated the land assuming the role of the eastern winds
Almost as an army, eager to conquer and longing for murder...

Step by step of the giant's trace
Torturing steps of drowning fear

Rhythmical growls will emit from its throat
With winged punishment blazed in depths of fire
Flaws obscuring its dormant mind
None retain what the beast dictates

Whether the saint begs or the demon glees
The mourning scream of revenge vanquish all what the eye perceives
Rhythmical glows will fade from its glare
With crimson spirits blessed in joy and hate
Ideals and ordeals with cheerful yells that haunt the bishop's dreams

Newborns sense it and delay their cries of redemption
They know what an escape must entail
Failure and deception with no mercy at the road
If one succeeds the secret is revealed for many others to drown in fear
For many others to dry in fear

Falling and falling with annoying pain
Falling forever in augmenting hell

Although the terrain is alone and people will die
The beast never will suffice
Only raging victims atone for everyone's mistakes
Mistakes of sinful vengeance of the past
That only the legendary beast can truly defeat
That only the beast can ever deceive

Praise in this day, oh this glorious day!
That the beast shall come and grant these souls
Emotions stained with blooded swords and glowing hopes with murder thoughts

Melodies willing to recall the fairies of illusions
To please all this illusions of deceptive needs of warring greed

Praise and raise to bliss and release
False ideals haunting fear and screams
Trick and repeat the lies of long forgotten years
For the legend sleeps within what people wish


Comments about The Legendary Beast by Erasmo Rayon

  • (10/23/2006 9:20:00 PM)


    Great poem. But i really think you probably should come back down to earth and realize you cannot build a light sabre. Come on-get for real my fellow poet of the rhyming write. Ya got a ten for this great write kind sir.
    God bless all poets-MJG.
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  • (10/18/2006 5:41:00 PM)


    It's very morbid. I like it......C. Erasmo Rayon N.
    Laters....................Joshua.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 1, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, August 20, 2010


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