In religion,
in pain,
in beauty,
in the ecstasy
of artistic satisfaction
and in many other things
that the Consciousness perceive,
the lover of God
recognizes at any rate
the fringe of the Real.
Yea, very well expressed, the openness and simplicity with which you write the poem is something unique, and I like it very much.
Your expression of God on a scale of love, pain, living, natural and supernatural is sublime! What else can I say? To place His existence, magnifying Him brilliantly in just a few lines, is itself an art called Poetry. I like the fact that you stick to your distinct ideas with a style of your own.
and in many other things that the Consciousness perceive, .......yes, it is. Very nicely expressed, beautiful poem.
A journey of conscience through the soulful aspects of life to realize the truth. Wonderful concept. I'm enriched.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the lover of God recognizes at any rate the fringe of the Real. beautiful and powerful