Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Thursday, September 27, 2012

The Maid-Servant Comments

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My poverty made me fall in love with a good maid-servant
I wanted to marry her but my family didn't grant
They separated us and confined me in a room
But still she wanted me as her beloved bridegroom
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Eric Cockrell 29 September 2012

love will and must find a way!

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Fredoneth Jonelas 28 September 2012

In love and can't deny it.

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Erika Wingo 27 September 2012

This poem tells such a tragic story of two people in love but up against the odds. So true how life can get in the way of happiness, isn't it? Powerful.

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Persian Khushi 27 September 2012

LOVE the ever powerful emotion! ! awesome writing!

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Solmon Jejemore Gbemiga 27 September 2012

Very pethetic and touching. It is not healhy for one to be denied of ones lover.

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Eindaray Kyaw 27 September 2012

A very sorrowful love story.. There are a lot of cases like this one..you point out it with your poem..great

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Charles Hancock 27 September 2012

Sounds like this poem is based on something that happend to you or someone you know. Thanks for sharing.

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Darkangel Flyfree 27 September 2012

That is so sad, but an awesome poem! ! !

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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