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**the Man I Was, The Man I Am, The Man I See, The Man I Hope To Be

Rating: 5.0

the man i was
i was
-foolish
-young
-unprepared
-weak
-lazy
-half-hearted

the man i am now

i am
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Maxim Muyu 01 January 2009

This is so great and awesome, lovely piece.

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Joseph Poewhit 01 January 2009

Sounds real reasonable - MERRY NEW ONE

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Sunand Sharma 12 January 2009

After reading your Poem, I also Hope To Be -be wise -be bold -be young in mind -be completely equiped -be the strongest Some Gud Qualities, which every one develop in order to excel in his/her life. keep it up! !

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Jan Fuentez 07 January 2009

Life is what we make it, and we are responsble for our actions and choices. Candidly written.

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Ted Sheridan 05 January 2009

You have a very good perception of your own responsibility for taking care of yourself. You will achieve great things in life, not the least amongst them will be your writing.

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Iris Athena 05 January 2009

straight to the point what you want to be nice, thumbs up

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Maxim Muyu 01 January 2009

This is so great and awesome, lovely piece.

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