The Men In My Poems Poem by Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)

The Men In My Poems

Rating: 4.8


I write poems and awkward feel
When friends hint or ask about
The men I drew in spite of flout,
About how much I from them conceal.

Well I confess at times I steal —
My heart thus reaching far and out,
And like a cup, a pan, or a sprout,
For hearts on wings and full of zeal...

Between my lines they stay alive,
Visible, talkable, more than real.
They're mine, each with a small seal,
Upon my breath they smile and thrive.

Ah lovers! You MAY use the word,
Though in my life they're seldom seen;
A painting may the Time out win,
And exists after the figure is blurred.

Jan.9th,2012.

Friday, March 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: memory,passion,poetry,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 March 2018

You confess at time write beautiful poems from your amazing memory. Words come alive within lines and lovable readers love to read. Wonderful picture is drawn in this beautifully presented poem..10

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Perdita Young 10 March 2018

Thank you for the kind words. We have to draw from memory and imagination sometimes. Perhaps people read too much reality into poems...Nice weekend! Have to go for supper and will be back soon.

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