Children's Day Poem by Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)

Children's Day

Rating: 5.0


Some decades ago,
Mom had us near, and said so:
Five cents to each, of you two,
You buy tickets for the zoo.
Be sure, use it to the full.

Overjoyed, we ran to zoo wall,
And climbed a tree enough tall;
We crawled secret and crossed:
In the zoo we were, without fail.

The money remained with us,
To use it, we had discussed-
Five cents for spiced melon seeds,
Five cents saved, for later use.
That's our Day, and our deeds!

June 1st,2013, on the Children's Day(in China) . Loosely based on Prof.Zhao Xifang's post about his childhood in his Sina microblog(Chinese Tweeter) .

Friday, March 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood,june,mom,money,mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 March 2018

Childhood memory is beautifully presented in this nice poem. Mother's affection ever shines. Children usually save money given by mother. A brilliant and excellent poem this is...10

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Perdita Young 10 March 2018

Money for a child is such luxury in China decades ago...And we have very few new clothes or toys in childhood. Families are becoming much richer now than in the past.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 March 2018

A vivid portrayal of a childhood memory. How commendable the character trait of being frugal at such a tender age and what a treasure to have a loving mother. A fantastic poem beautifully crafted.10

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Perdita Young 12 March 2018

Thank you for the comment and compliment, dear Rose. Life used to be very hard for many Chinese families.

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Bri Edwards 30 July 2018

i'm not sure what their 'mom' meant by use it to the full, BUT, ignoring the children's mischievous behavior in not paying the entry fee, i guess they planned their use well. very well! thanks for the Poet's Notes. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Robert Murray Smith 15 April 2018

The wiles of children come through nicely in this poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 April 2018

A very interesting poem that carries us in our own childhood of such sweet and naughty memories.

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Deep Paul 08 April 2018

Childhood memories.10++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 March 2018

Overjoyed, we ran to zoo wall, And climbed a tree enough tall; We crawled secret and crossed: In the zoo we were, without fail.......I was transported to my lost child hood! Well penned...10

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Perdita Young 12 March 2018

Thank you very much for your time and support, Dr.Swain. We all have nostalgia for the past.

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