! The Next Day Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur

! The Next Day

Rating: 2.8
 


Glitters of snows lingers in eyes,
like a taste of a promised bliss,
while hangover of conscious,
in the chill of night,
lost in mists of dismay,
and shiver of hands,
catching the tremors,
when spark of fire dreamed in mind,
and face of winds,
refused by mirror,
While rose petals,
dropping like tears,
and numbed bare feet,
weary and lost,
the journey,
begins with heart of defeat,
there is some room,
upon the top of the hill,
as i lock the door,
waiting for the next day.

! The Next Day
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2009

the journey, begins with heart of defeat, there is some room, upon the top of the hill, as i lock the door, waiting for the next day.yes there lies hope forbrightto morrow and thatkeepsus alive inthis world...beutifullydepicted inverses.....10

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Catrina Heart 20 December 2009

profound composition.....shared in a stunning knotty genre....loved it! ! !

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Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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