Billy Loving


The Observant Girl - Poem by Billy Loving

Nature's wonders abound
Making not a sound
Fog rolling down the river
Cold making me shiver
On the horizon, a bright orange sun
It's work for the day done
Bring on the night
It's stars, a delight
Luminous yellow moon
To start it's show soon
Just sitting in the grass
A happy, content lass
Staring up with awe and glee
The Maker's beautiful works amazing me

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Couplet


Comments about The Observant Girl by Billy Loving

  • Wes Vogler (12/8/2015 1:16:00 AM)


    So you are a girl? Now I know and I would say from the maturity and activity somewhere between thirty and fifty..
    So no chum (I am 85) wife 81 married 61 years Been at this site just over a month now and writing too many limericks (wife says) This was a good one.
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    Billy Loving Billy Loving (12/8/2015 10:14:00 AM)

    No, I'm a man.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 5, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 20, 2016


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