The Observant Girl Poem by Billy Loving

The Observant Girl

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Nature's wonders abound
Making not a sound
Fog rolling down the river
Cold making me shiver
On the horizon, a bright orange sun
It's work for the day done
Bring on the night
It's stars, a delight
Luminous yellow moon
To start it's show soon
Just sitting in the grass
A happy, content lass
Staring up with awe and glee
The Maker's beautiful works amazing me

Thursday, November 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 08 December 2015

So you are a girl? Now I know and I would say from the maturity and activity somewhere between thirty and fifty.. So no chum (I am 85) wife 81 married 61 years Been at this site just over a month now and writing too many limericks (wife says) This was a good one.

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Billy Loving 08 December 2015

No, I'm a man.

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