Brie Carter

Rookie - 0 Points (March 12,1994 / Dalton)

The Ocean - Poem by Brie Carter

Clouds hug the touch shorline
The rocks curve upward sharply against the water
Oozing mud surprises the soft sand on the beach
As her face swings towards the blue sky
Clinging to the belief that the soft kiss was real


Comments about The Ocean by Brie Carter

  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (6/26/2009 12:37:00 AM)

    you reminded my of Fay on this piece. awesome (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 6, 2008



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