The Only Two People In The World Poem by Elena Plotkin

The Only Two People In The World

Rating: 5.0


He saw past the blemishes in me
that others scorned me for,
My outer skin he would not see,
He only saw what was in my heart's core.
He paid no heed to what others said,
My words were all he ever heard.
It mattered not that others stared.
To him, we were the only two people in the world.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(c) 1993 copyright Elena Plotkin
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 26 August 2013

The loved that these two persons shared was so deep that it made them feel that they were the only two in the world. Reminds me of Adam and Eve the first humans created by God. A perfect union until they disobeyed. An inspiring write.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 20 August 2013

that's how it should be but is hardly....ever! nice poem, Elena.

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Alookh (matin) 19 August 2013

To him, we were the only two people in the world....very intresting... :)

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Khairul Ahsan 17 August 2013

First and foremost,10/10. It's a poem of a very high standard, as it conveys your mind precisely, in just eight lines. It's a pleasure to read this kind of a poem, where your heart sings the glory of a person who appreciates you for whatever you are worth.

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