The Pain Poem by Christian Frakes

The Pain

Rating: 4.2


Sometimes I sit and wonder
What others might have felt
Do they deal with things the same way
Do they know the pain that I have felt

Can they comprehend
The strife that's in my heart
This sinking feeling of loneliness
That grasps at me in the dark

Wednesday, October 31, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danielle 31 October 2018

I loved this. It’s short, yet so powerful. It contains so much raw emotion. If this is your first poem, then wow 10/10. Please write and upload more. I will be watching.

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Anonymous 31 October 2018

Wow, this is very short, yet very powerful. A lot of raw emotion. 1010.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 03 November 2018

So nice poem. .....Good luck.. .

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Solomon Senxer 02 November 2018

Indeed! I think everyone at least thinks like you do! Heheheh!

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Frakes. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 01 November 2018

Sometimes pain hurts so much it feels like it will never fade, Time is a great healer, it will get better, a powerful poem.

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Chinedu Dike 31 October 2018

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Christian.

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