Sometimes I sit and wonder
What others might have felt
Do they deal with things the same way
Do they know the pain that I have felt
Can they comprehend
The strife that's in my heart
This sinking feeling of loneliness
That grasps at me in the dark
Wow, this is very short, yet very powerful. A lot of raw emotion. 1010.
Indeed! I think everyone at least thinks like you do! Heheheh!
A good start with a nice poem, Frakes. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Sometimes pain hurts so much it feels like it will never fade, Time is a great healer, it will get better, a powerful poem.
Well conceived and elegantly brought forth with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Christian.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I loved this. It’s short, yet so powerful. It contains so much raw emotion. If this is your first poem, then wow 10/10. Please write and upload more. I will be watching.