The Pain(90) Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

The Pain(90)

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Some pains leads to happiness,
Some pains leads to sorrow,
Some pains leads without reasons.

Giving a birth to a child by heartfelt mom,
It's a kind of beautiful pain.
An appreciation towards the job done,
It's a kind of beautiful pain.
The health we keep relaxed,
There is a kind of beautiful pain.
Sometimes, somehow,
The happiness we get is also kind of beautiful pain.

Hurting others or hurted by others,
Seem to be horrible pain.
Hurting others or hurted by others,
The doing a sin is horrible pain.
Hurting others or hurted by others,
The irritation is a horrible pain.
Hurting others or hurted by others,
Theiving other's property,
Seem to be a kind horrible pain.

Each and every pain,
Maybe beautiful of horrible,
But to be taken in positive,
Which is in the hands of human.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 08 September 2018

A wonderful poetry shared....10 Naila

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Rajnish Manga 08 September 2018

Nicely deconstructed- the reality of pain- its causes and/or impacts. But each pain should be taken in a positive sense. Thanks, Dear Poet Friend.

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M Asim Nehal 23 January 2019

A nice poem on pain. How we take them defines our own personality.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 September 2018

wow wow wow from the PAINS TAKEN BY OUR PAETS in hit and tials emerged e as mom yelled in terrile pain once over she shed tears of joy o were then born a boy she did then enjoy u do now Buddha said to rredue GRIEF and get relief cut out the pain so the child came u b happy 4 moommmyyyy

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Ravi Sathasivam 11 September 2018

Excellent. A meaningful and well analyzed poem. Enjoyed reading it.

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Bharati Nayak 11 September 2018

A beautiful poem about pain.There are some feelings we exactly can not differentiate as pain or pleasure.We may be pained still love that pain.- - It is pleasant pain like that one feels when in love. Life is full of pain and pleasure.But our life we live by the way we perceive a situation.

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Valsa George 09 September 2018

So true.....! Even our pains have a beautiful side. The pain of child birth is a beautiful pain for a mother! The pain of accomplishing a task gives us joy! Well analysed!

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