The Part Of Article 断 章 Poem by Rachel Gao

The Part Of Article 断 章

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You are standing on the bridge to appreciate the scenery

The man of appreciateing the scenery is appreciateing you upstairs

The bright moon has decorated your window


And you have decorated another man's dream


This poem used to be a long poem, but the poet thought the four sentence were the best, and then deleted other sentences, so the title of the poem is the part of article.

I think this short poem reveals a sweet love story.A man fell in love with a lovely girl who was appreciating the scenery, but the girl just focus on the beautiful nature.The girl gained the reture for her love in nature, so the bright moon has decorated girl's window, , , And how do The upstairs man gain his return for his love with the girl? ? 'you have decorated another man's dream '
An unrequited love ends up with the sweet dream....



断 章

卞 之 琳


你 站 在 桥 上 看 风 景

看 风 景 的 人 在 楼 上 看 你

明 月 装 饰 了 你 的 窗 子

你 装 饰 了 别 人 的 梦

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 20 August 2009

fabulous written piece in succinct structure....

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Ying Escalona 20 August 2009

if its me dreaming Rachel? i will pray, that i will never wake up

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