The Past 03 Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

The Past 03

Rating: 5.0

The past
comes back at us
with a vengeance,
an unrelieved itch.

those rose buds of
the rosy days passed
may never blossom
and shed fragrance,

but the thorns
definitely
get sharper
by the hour.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Lost in the past are the good memories. But the bad ones live on to haunt. For Life!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 18 July 2023

Just brilliant.......thanks for sharing...

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Nice words, sir. Thank you

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Thank you, dear poets Cowboy Ron Williams, Denis Meir, Anjandev and Dillip K Swain for appreciating the poetic effort

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2023

Yes, this one is perfectly right! An excellent series dear poet!

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Thank you Dillipji. Much obliged

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Thank you poet Denis Meir, for the suggestion

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Cowboy Ron Williams 19 July 2023

My experience has been more or less the opposite. I remember the roses more than the thorns.

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You are really a blessed one, dear poet

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Denis Mair 19 July 2023

A sensitive soul is vulnerable to being ambushed by the past. (Suggestion: 'shed fragrance' instead of 'she'd fragrance')

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A typo, Sir. Thank you

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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