The Plum Sting Poem by Hasanul Kabir

The Plum Sting

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Water and mud the school stands by,
And was hurry to get the bell.
The plum tree branches were not so high,
And very few plums had taming spell.

All the plum stings were then Kai-fin,
The full grown stings were really they.
Enough to rip my young-ling skin;
Bleed I, like the giraffe to say!

Oh! Joy, you have a different shade, and
Tough to know your silence trend.
Years to go the tie to cut, and
The tears be inked; the sticks be penned!

Ah! Silence, how balanced your stings are!
No claim; no question; but the drain-
That's full of tears run like a spear.
One spear that aims at the multiple pain!

Thursday, November 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: water
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 31 December 2019

Plum tree beside the school building ripe plums and unruly boys the thorns of tree body unmanageable situation is delineated

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 December 2019

Write comment. Such a nice start, Hasanul Kabir. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 26 November 2019

A beautiful piece of poetry elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Hasanul.

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Hasanul Kabir 27 November 2019

Thanks a lot for your inspiring words.

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