The Promise I Made.... Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

The Promise I Made....



The more you give me pain
the more you can see me smile
for once I promised you
as whatever you like to give
will take it.....with tears filled smile.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 07 January 2009

ths s quiet different dear childish engineer.the wrds u used r simple but meaningful..ths piece s very beautiful..am speechless to ths poem, , very nice nd has a deep meaning..i cant express the wrds i wanto say, , , , ths s xcellent..am proud of u..

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