Sebastine Humaemo

Rookie - 0 Points (04-03-1985 / INDIA)

Love And Crime............ - Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

In a hour I will die
thats what you.... asked me to do
never you think its my first time
am going to die for you
for all the words, you keep throwing at me
with a broken heart.....I cry falling to my knee

The day you said......our love was not true
your words.....broke my heart into two
if this is what.....am supposed to do
with tears sure I will do it for you

The torn letters.....lying on the floor
burns into ashes........knowing I wll be no more
like a child now I start to cry
finally I too got loved and betrayd


In few minutes I wll die
thats what you.... asked me to do
never you think its my first time
am going to die for you
for all the words, you keep throwing at me
with a broken heart.....I cry falling to my knee

Under darkness my soul.... cries aloud and weeps
while my phone....still awaits....your last call beeps
only thing that shines....under darkness with my tears
was the piston....got from the money...saved for our wedding cheers

My soul cries for help.....asking someone to save
by the minute I press the trigger....please do reply
are you sure.......like a tide you going to move
washing our fun and love.....like a morning moves a dew


In few seconds I wll die
thats what you.... asked me to do
never you think its my first time
am going to die for you
for all the words, you keep throwing at me
with a broken heart.....I cry falling to my knee

As you liked.....I went to sleep
tears and blood.........down my face
all the dreams...I have built....in a second gone as a waste
till your back, I wish to lie.......with my eyes open for you
seeing your eyes....I have to say its our crime...please don't give excuse


I just died....hope your free
you can now..........live your life
since once you said.....you love me
I just came...leaving all the ones....who loved me

But for now.....I lay dead... alone and no one to mourn
all my life..............I happened to be your circus clown
now my eyes seen sheading tears for its own
while my soul raises up saying....its our crime please don't give excuse....


Comments about Love And Crime............ by Sebastine Humaemo

  • (5/15/2009 8:41:00 PM)

    well written with emotions........innerconscience and the outer world......always contradict with one another........your crafting emotional outburst in the poem is very very nice...... see my 10++ (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2009 10:42:00 PM)

    I have written similar things.. like I just reacged death.. but this is a million times better :) you have a great talen, and i could feel you, feel your pain while i read it.10+++++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • (1/16/2009 7:53:00 AM)

    Sebastine, this is fantastic, I love some of the phrasings, it is a brilliant poem. Keep writing moore poems like this! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/16/2009 7:00:00 AM)

    ello sebastine....... very very well penned! keep it coming you are so good! i almost cried sitting here in school reading this! ! ! nice job! keep writing and thanks for sharing! 10+ (Report)Reply

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  • (1/16/2009 2:25:00 AM)

    Dude nicely penned with beautifull matter (Report)Reply

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  • (1/16/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    hi sebastine....... very well written.. very interesting poem...... i felt that was watching a true love story. each and every lines of the poem rolls the picture in my mind. love is eternal so y u kill your self for the girl who dont know the feel of love.
    failure of love gives dead ful pain that u explained in good flow.....: -)
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  • (1/16/2009 12:37:00 AM)

    wow this is incredible.im speechless lol.but i can say that you put deep thought into this poem and how you came up with the concept is beyond me.A VERY INTERESTING POEM! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/16/2009 12:36:00 AM)

    Hey Sebastine....very well written..deeply passionate, poignant, heaart-rending, etal a great piece....keep up! ! ! ....deeply touching! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/15/2009 6:55:00 PM)

    detailed way of dying, , , , sweet enginneer, ths s hw it goes..
    from an hour
    a minute
    nd seconds, ur waiting somebody stops u..
    so, , whats the purpose of killing urself..
    love? ..yes...love s all n ur heart
    the wrld will not luf when u die
    but'' she'' lufs at u coz she wins
    coz, for her, ur life has no value
    she s cruel as the tidal wave
    crimes? what crime r u saying?
    love will not be a crime
    both of u r not criminals
    but...if love s a crime...my gosh...
    ALL HUMAN BEINGS ARE ALL CRIMINALS...
    .......take note....what trigger r u saying? be sure its not an illegal firearms ha? or else, , , that s the crime ur lookin.....hehehehhehe...lav ya...ur poems r sad ha....but u made it, , , cheers...
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 14, 2009



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