Sebastine Humaemo

Rookie - 0 Points (04-03-1985 / INDIA)

Broken Heart............. - Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

When the day I met you in my life
everything around me felt so nice
each day my heart awaited your message
and your voice gave my life a new passage
all of a sudden you vanished like a hare
besides knowing, I am the one whom you much cared

months rolled on with sleepless night
and I searched you, all the days with tears filled sight
second time in my life you crossed my eye
holding my arms you said will again never fly
with heart full of love, thought I got you again
but am a poor soul, cos I don't know someone already fixed in your brain

the day when you said you got a pair
I was almost dead like a wrecked chair
I still remember the night when I was walking with you
you stopped me and asked whether am in love on you
with heart full of pain I burried my love
cos I dont wanna make you feel since I thought your already in love

when you said...you started loving me from the day we met
I couldn find a word to speak but only wept
the tears in your eyes showed your forced to pair with a wrong one
and I felt the cries from your heart, asking me to save you from that one
when my lips tried to say come with me am there for you
your tears said, its too late and they have already ruined your life from you

when you left me alone in road bidding me bye with a false smile
I got the reason why you came again in my life for a while
its..... for not to inform me that you got a pair
but to know whether I too love and care you trully... like you cared

if a day comes when you couldn't bear the pain they give you...
just turn around and check
.... I will be there with arms wide open awaiting for you...


Comments about Broken Heart............. by Sebastine Humaemo

  • Maia Padua (5/18/2009 6:15:00 AM)


    wow...a heart that speaks...
    very lovely....
    full of feelings...
    feelings of love...and assurance to someone you love...
    i love the thoughts and the lines...
    very realistic...love in pain...love in trials...
    i love this
    10++++
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  • (1/12/2009 11:08:00 AM)


    this work speaks of truths a lot of people are going through, whether they want to admit it or not. good friend, friend. not a 10, but a 100000000000000 (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2009 6:43:00 PM)


    WHAT A PROMISING LINE...am referring to the last 2 lines of ur piece...why s so sad? but, lifes, , bitter nd sweet...just be patient and keep calm, , , all humanbeings will pass nd cross ths way like ur expressing in ur lines..but there s god, , , just trust, , just wait, shell come...doncry over spilled milk, , f its not urs, leave 8, , ,
    engineer, i read almost half of ur poems, , allsad opposite to ur loud lufs...
    i really like ths piece of urs, , i reli like ths..
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  • (1/5/2009 1:12:00 AM)


    you put your soul into it...
    excellent
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  • (12/31/2008 1:06:00 AM)


    Awesome poem. I like it very much. I liked how you told us the good and bad moments, it tell us how imperfect life can be. (Report) Reply

  • (12/14/2008 12:38:00 PM)


    I can feel the emotion just poring out of this. excellent piece of work. I like it a lot.good job.
    Becca
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  • (12/12/2008 8:12:00 AM)


    nice poem like brittnay said kinda sad but its good comment some of mine if u dont mind (Report) Reply

  • (12/1/2008 11:16:00 AM)


    pretty good. that's sort of sad. but has a lot of meaning and that is what makes a good poem.

    brittany
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  • (11/26/2008 8:29:00 AM)


    'if a day comes when you couldn bear the pain they give you...
    just turn around n check
    .... i will be there with arms wide open awaiting for you...'

    hey Seby (can I call u thus) ,
    another masterpiece from you
    +++++++10 regards anjali
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/12/2008 10:45:00 AM)


    'if a day comes whn yu couldn bear the pain thy give yu...
    jst turn around n check
    .... i will be there with arms wide open awaitin for yu...' very nice proclamation. Nice poem.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 13, 2008


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