The Rainy Season Poem by Max Reif

The Rainy Season

Rating: 3.5


The rain's gone on two days,
I hope it goes on longer,
this welcome break from time.

The sun demands
a smile, a dance,
a day of work, or play.

The rain makes no demands,
It covers and it nurtures,

shelters seedlings
in its arms.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Lukas 28 December 2005

I'm not a fan of the rain unless I have a day off (which is not often lately) . Seems like people on DC highways just stop moving when they see a dropp (pomehunter has that tendancy to add extra p's to words and I do apologize) of water on their windsheilds. I liked the simplicity of your poem. It works especially well because you point out how do don't want to do much because of the rain. Take care.

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Solomon Brook 28 December 2005

I love nicely creative poems on natural events. Especially the last few lines of this one were well stated. Perhaps you could have extended it a bit more. Would have been nice to have the freshment of 'The Rainy Season' hang around longer. Thanks for sharing.

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Vansh kesarawani 24 May 2019

Not happy

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Amanarya 13 July 2018

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R H 12 April 2006

'The rain makes no demands, it covers and it nurtures' - I love your perception of the rain and the way you have created such a vivid picture in so few words. A really refreshing read. (My perception of the rain is called 'Understated'.) Kind regards, Justine.

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Tan Pratonix 08 February 2006

You have captured the spirit of the rainy season. Every word, every phrase, capturing a thought, a mood, a feeling. And then the beautiful unforgettable 'Sheltering seedlings in its arms'. Bravo!

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Mary Nagy 28 December 2005

I loved this Max! One of my favorite things to do is sit on my porch during a rainstorm............nothing better! Very nice poem. Sincerely, Mary

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