louis rams

Gold Star - 9,383 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

The Rapping Fool - Poem by louis rams

I was sitting here with not a thing to do
So I wrote this story just for you.

Walking to school with my head held down
Listening to my mp playing the hip hop sound.

(FOR A GUY) Checking out these fine young ladies
Just one look and they drove me crazy.

(FOR A GIRL) checking out these fine young men
They looked like they was heaven sent.

I got to school and security was there
They said dmz was here.
He was telling us to stay in school
Cause you don’t want to play the fool.
If you want to be something in life
Then you better think twice.
Then he asked: if this happened to you
What do you think you would do?

What do you do when you have a woman
Who gives you so many excuses, so many lies
Tearing up friendships, breaking all ties.
she said she loved me and that was her plan
To use me to get to another man.

I told her:
I poured out my heart to you
to show your sincerity- you did the same thing too.
How easy it is for you to tell these lies
In that you can’t deny.
You would do anything to achieve that goal
To the devil “ would you sell your soul.”?

These things happen to us all
Even the rich and famous- we do fall.
Stay in school and make a life with someone
That you truly love
and thank the lord from above.
Not all of us can get into the music world
And it’s not a life for a young boy or girl
Your life you will live out of a suitcase
And your family will never get to see your face.

Rappers have a short musical span
So they try to get all they can.
For my age, I still rock
Gotten so good I stopped the clock.
They say I’m a rapping fool
For my age I’m pretty cool.
Now I could rap with the best
I just have to write it down
And I’ll pass the test.

DON’T BE A FOOL- STAY IN SCHOOL


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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 18, 2010



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