Whispering Rose

Rookie - 0 Points (14/10/1990 / Algeria)

The Return - Poem by Whispering Rose

Along with my heart you took my breath
And i was left for death
To replace your absence
Or just shorten the distance
That took us ways apart
And caused you to break my heart
My tears left track
To help you come back
I'll be here where i can be found
Waiting for your return

Comments about The Return by Whispering Rose

  • Unwritten Soul (8/23/2010 5:04:00 PM)

    Your heart is really beautiful like roses! i can see it through ur writing...u can lead a way for that person comes to you...cut the distance, call for presence...but how to lead that person to back to you? the way is..keep your heart pure and bright like now, and even more...then ur heart will be like a light house in the middle of night to help any stray person to lead their way! and u help them! ....your poem is very nice and very nice and nice..thanks for sharing! it really a whisper from rose. :) (Report) Reply

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  • (8/20/2010 3:00:00 PM)

    An eloquent, poetic write, nice meditation (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 11, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011

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