I Know But I Try Poem by Whispering Rose

I Know But I Try

Rating: 5.0

I try to forget
When you are not around I try to live
I know
Soon you are going to leave
I try to ignore
That what I am feeling is real
I know
One day it's going to disappear
I try to fake
The smile when you look at me
I know
There is a tear deep inside of me
I try to remember
Everything you say and do
I know
You can’t be true
I try to be
The person you once loved
I know
Some way we, both, have changed
I try to pretend
That your heart is mine
I know
It hurts to think otherwise

Tanvi Damle 22 January 2010

aww...love can hurt alot...but be glad that you were blessed enough to experience it...very nicely penned down :)

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 26 January 2010

You really know how to weave emotions..good work again.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 13 November 2011

wow! ..great poem, full of emotions and very real........! 10++++++++

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nacera dansoun 15 July 2011

wowwwww! this is so romantic.well we know that love will hurt us, that we can't handle it but we fall in love & why is that? .no one knows. i guess that we become so stupid in love. great work. u deserve more than 10

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majid Alsaady 28 October 2010

real everyday honest feeling / so many suffer this experience but could or would not utter a word only deep inside the pain penterates esp. women in the third world. they suffer great coz of social barriers. thanks for expressing this line.

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Full of emotion rather sad, but penned so well! Lovely; D

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Emeka Chunye 22 April 2010

Some things are certain but fear will never let us accept it.

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