I Know But I Try Poem by Whispering Rose

I Know But I Try

Rating: 5.0


I try to forget
When you are not around I try to live
I know
Soon you are going to leave
I try to ignore
That what I am feeling is real
I know
One day it's going to disappear
I try to fake
The smile when you look at me
I know
There is a tear deep inside of me
I try to remember
Everything you say and do
I know
You can’t be true
I try to be
The person you once loved
I know
Some way we, both, have changed
I try to pretend
That your heart is mine
I know
It hurts to think otherwise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanvi Damle 22 January 2010

aww...love can hurt alot...but be glad that you were blessed enough to experience it...very nicely penned down :)

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 26 January 2010

You really know how to weave emotions..good work again.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 13 November 2011

wow! ..great poem, full of emotions and very real........! 10++++++++

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nacera dansoun 15 July 2011

wowwwww! this is so romantic.well we know that love will hurt us, that we can't handle it but we fall in love & why is that? .no one knows. i guess that we become so stupid in love. great work. u deserve more than 10

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majid Alsaady 28 October 2010

real everyday honest feeling / so many suffer this experience but could or would not utter a word only deep inside the pain penterates esp. women in the third world. they suffer great coz of social barriers. thanks for expressing this line.

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Full of emotion rather sad, but penned so well! Lovely; D

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Emeka Chunye 22 April 2010

Some things are certain but fear will never let us accept it.

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