Wednesday, November 28, 2007

The River Part Ii Comments

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The river led me to you though the way was hard and long,
It saw me through adversity and taught me to be strong,
For when the doubts beset me that you would be waiting there,
At the river's end I saw you and it kept me from despair.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ernestine Northover 02 April 2008

Great continuation here Andrew and what an epic write combining the two poems. Amazing weave of words. Excellent. Applause. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 22 March 2008

Bravo! ! Applaud! ! ! Applaud! ! , The River Part 2, for those of you that have not read Part 1 read on........It really is worth it! ! Thankyou again Andrew Your Poetry is Brilliant Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 28 November 2007

A Great beginning and a happy ending! I like happy endings! ! ! *10 *! ! Thad

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