The Rivers Of Dreams Comments

It's a sparkling piece of poetry! I find a liquid movement from top to bottom! Lucidity of poetic expression makes it endearing! My favorite lines: The rivers of dreams/I have set off to rest/Tired, hostage at midnight/I swim continuously and without rest between them....Very commendable piece of work! I vote the poem with a 10

Vivid imagery wonderfully woven.10

A work of an active imagination, well articulated and nicely brought forth. A beautiful creation Fatmir. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

'The rivers of dreams I have set off to rest Tired, hostage at midnight I swim continuously and without rest between them.' Thanks for sharing. Joshua.