The Rough Tone Poem by abhipsa panda

The Rough Tone

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Some get utmost pleasure,
by uttering words of rough.
They used to have strength major,
in doing job so tough.

Don't they know the very pain,
the innocent listener is suffering,
How the morals go in vain,
ridiculous when they uttering.

Do they forget someone upright,
who will never forgive the sight.
God is the name with sole right,
who will teach a lesson tight.

How they consider self greater,
having so mistakes on their part.
How can someone rests with honour,
when it breaks someone's heart.

Friday, October 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: cruelty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 14 October 2018

Words are forgotten but a rough tone is never forgotten. A beautiful poem.

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Abhipsa Panda 14 October 2018

Thank you so much Sir...

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Naila Rais 13 October 2018

Loved it.........10 Naila

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Abhipsa Panda 13 October 2018

Thanks dear naila

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 October 2018

Don't they know the very pain, the innocent listener is suffering, How the morals go in vain, ridiculous when they uttering. such behaviour comes from an elated Ego..... Ego wounds others, in words and deeds..........you have pictured it here very well...... there are so many simple things to note for a poet and poetess. we write about simple things which touch the reader.. thank u. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 13 October 2018

Yes sir....Thank you so much for your appreciation

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