The Sadness Of War Poem by Laughlan Orr

The Sadness Of War

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War time saddness
It's time for leaving,
The family is grieving,
So many have died,
Everyone has cried,
Climbing into the spitfire
The horizon looking dire
Taxiing onto the runway,
Come what may,
We are on the takeoff roll,
Being tossed about like a little rag doll,
With the Rolls Royce whining,
And the fuselage shining,
We have lift off,
Soon we are aloft,
Flying ever higher,
The altitude I desire,
Then down into battle,
The plane starts to rattle,
The sound of a gun,
I thought this was going to be fun,
The smell of fire,
This, I do not desire,
Smoke in the cockpit,
I am scared, I have to admit.
Seventy two years,
From those fears,
Because of their lives,
We will remember them

Thursday, November 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 06 November 2018

An important write written very uniquely. Looking forward to reading more from you

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Kim Barney 04 November 2018

Indeed, war solves nothing and causes only misery. Welcome to Poem Hunter and thanks for posting your first poem here! May you post many more.

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Chinedu Dike 02 November 2018

An insightful rendition nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Laughlan.

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Dave Walker 02 November 2018

War solves nothing all it brings is heartache and suffering. A great poem.

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Solomon Senxer 02 November 2018

yea, the predicament of war!

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