Thursday, November 1, 2018

The Sadness Of War Comments

Rating: 5.0

War time saddness
It's time for leaving,
The family is grieving,
So many have died,
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Laughlan Orr
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Susan Williams 06 November 2018

An important write written very uniquely. Looking forward to reading more from you

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Kim Barney 04 November 2018

Indeed, war solves nothing and causes only misery. Welcome to Poem Hunter and thanks for posting your first poem here! May you post many more.

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Chinedu Dike 02 November 2018

An insightful rendition nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Laughlan.

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Dave Walker 02 November 2018

War solves nothing all it brings is heartache and suffering. A great poem.

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Solomon Senxer 02 November 2018

yea, the predicament of war!

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