I met with bob the carrot
And he looked a bit pale
I asked wether he was ok
And he said he was ashamed
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This is a brilliant verse, Aufie. I think you are on the way to a volume, filled with great meaning, for young audiences.
A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. Great read for and children.
Excellent! Beautifully penned. This is how good poetry needs to be. Top score