Friday, December 15, 2023

The Shame Of Bob The Carrot Comments

Rating: 5.0

I met with bob the carrot
And he looked a bit pale
I asked wether he was ok
And he said he was ashamed
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Aufie Zophy
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Excellent! Beautifully penned. This is how good poetry needs to be. Top score

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M.J. Lemon 19 December 2023

This is a brilliant verse, Aufie. I think you are on the way to a volume, filled with great meaning, for young audiences.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 December 2023

A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. Great read for and children.

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