Wednesday, June 6, 2018

The Song Of The Ocean Comments

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Don't you know my heavy heart
My dear friend, oh wind
Its dark mystery inside
My dear friend oh wind
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Indira Renganathan
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Valsa George 12 June 2018

Reading this, I feel the rhythm of the undulating waves of the ocean and hear the soft hiss of the wavelets and it slowly rising into a deafening crescendo as the wavelets grow into billows! Beautiful song of the ocean! (10)

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Savita Tyagi 11 June 2018

This is so beautiful. I am simply touched and in awe with the plea of a grieving human heart that your poem reflects. Who could be a better listener than that blowing wind or a better guide than that rising sun.

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Aarzoo Mehek 09 June 2018

My plea to the rising sun To light the dark mystery This sums up the poem. Heart touchy and sensitive.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 June 2018

Heart is like ocean where there is full of mystery. A great philosophical write duly presented. Thank u dear madam for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 June 2018

My dear friend oh wind blow, blow Low or high I sob and sigh Hiss or roar, my words to Him........utterly sensational! It's rally a fabulous poem dear madam....I loved reading each line of this song of Ocean! Stay always happy and blessed dear madam.....(10) ........Dillip

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