Don't you know my heavy heart
My dear friend, oh wind
Its dark mystery inside
My dear friend oh wind
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This is so beautiful. I am simply touched and in awe with the plea of a grieving human heart that your poem reflects. Who could be a better listener than that blowing wind or a better guide than that rising sun.
My plea to the rising sun To light the dark mystery This sums up the poem. Heart touchy and sensitive.
Heart is like ocean where there is full of mystery. A great philosophical write duly presented. Thank u dear madam for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
My dear friend oh wind blow, blow Low or high I sob and sigh Hiss or roar, my words to Him........utterly sensational! It's rally a fabulous poem dear madam....I loved reading each line of this song of Ocean! Stay always happy and blessed dear madam.....(10) ........Dillip
Reading this, I feel the rhythm of the undulating waves of the ocean and hear the soft hiss of the wavelets and it slowly rising into a deafening crescendo as the wavelets grow into billows! Beautiful song of the ocean! (10)