The Sound Of Silence Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

The Sound Of Silence

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Missing am I that rare sound of silence
Which, heard I'd only in mind, not in ears,
And ah what a unique kind of silence—
The sound coming as if from far off spheres!

A virtual symphony that'd all hearts please—
Take whispered sighs of the parched desert sand
Caressed by unseen wind with its soft hand,
Gossip of leaves rustling, ruffled by breeze,

The breathing of rain-washed gigantic trees,
Smiles of flowers blossoming in their youth,
In hurry to hail hasting sun to ease,
And sundry sounds losing in noise their truth.

Lost rhythm of our breath heard never ere,
The murmur of heart beat, and pulse of blood,
And our own hungry stomach's keen fervour
That heretofore vaguely felt as faint thud.

The unlock phase one welcome was found,
But my heart now goes back to lockdown's time,
Its leisurely pace, soft rhythm and rhyme,
And missing I'm that silence-born rare sound.
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Musings |03.07.2020|
Topic: silence, sound, time, rhyme

Thursday, July 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: rhyme,silence,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Corona has been a bad dream, a great disaster let loose we all know by whom, but still even worst things are rarely without a few silver linings, how so fleetingly felt.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Sound od Silence is beautiful. A virtual symphony that'd all hearts please— Take whispered sighs of the parched desert sand Caressed by unseen wind with its soft hand, Gossip of leaves rustling, ruffled by breeze, ....10

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Juliet L. Languedoc 24 July 2020

Wow what a echo in descriptions in colored personifications. Thanks

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Sankaran Ayya 23 July 2020

Sound of silence is beautifully written classic poem. Its merit is suitably worded rhyme. Nowadays most of the poems look like colloquial prose dialogue. A virtual symphony that'd all hearts please— Take whispered sighs of the parched desert sand Caressed by unseen wind with its soft hand, Gossip of leaves rustling, ruffled by breeze, - - -really classic Bravo poet Aniruddha Pathak !

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Godhra - Gujarat
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